I didn't get much out of this video. Why are you running? Where are you going? The sound of the tripod clicking and the coming into frame was distracting. I like the small vignette effect. Focus more on stronger concepts and more thoughtful camera work. The cut off at the end was also jolting.
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I didn't get much out of this video. Why are you running? Where are you going? The sound of the tripod clicking and the coming into frame was distracting. I like the small vignette effect. Focus more on stronger concepts and more thoughtful camera work. The cut off at the end was also jolting.
It was a little confusing. I wasn't sure what you were getting at. I think there needs to be more to the story.
I feel the same s the others that posted.
What are you doing/what are you running to/from?
Needs a bit more.
captivating.
i really liked how you kept the camera pretty steady and i kinda like how it is mysterious like you dont know where you are going
i didnt really get what was going on in this, if he was running or riding a bike or what. i feel like it needed more to it.
i think this was good idea..but it could have been better. maybe if u walked slower or maybe if it had a better storyline.
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